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Love hurts
Contributed by
skinsfan
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Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 09:53:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Love can be so wonderful
When you finally find the right man
But then something happens
And you say I’ll never do this again
My mother always told me
Mr. right will come along
But one thing she never told me
Is something could also go wrong
I want to make you love me
But I don’t know what else to do
I’ve tried to make you love me
But sometimes I feel there’s no use
My heart is made of flesh and blood
I don’t have a heart of steel
I only know I love you
But I’m not sure as to how you feel
My world is slowly falling apart
And I don’t know how to make it stop
I’m stuck in between what’s right and wrong
And believe me, It has me caught
I would take you far away
If I thought it would do any good
I want to make you love me
Because it would feel so good
To have you there by my side
Would make my life complete
Please tell me how to do it
Before I cry out defeat
Sometimes I wish I was superman
Then I could have a heart of steel
Then maybe this pain I have inside
Would surely start to heal
I want to make you love me
Please tell me what to do
If you really don’t love me, Please say so
Instead of making me feel like a fool
I cry myself to sleep at night
Just wondering how you feel
I can’t hold out much longer
Please tell me what to do
Don’t play me for a sucker
Because that wasn’t in the deal
I really truly love you
And I will until the end is near
I don’t know if you can understand me
But this is how I really feel
I only know I love you dear
And I will until I die
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skinsfan
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2004-07-26 09:53:20]
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Re: Love hurts
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 11:22:30 AM AEST
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I can see why it was made into a song it flows really well. For me its got that country feel to it, excellent work.
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Re: Love hurts
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 01:15:23 PM AEST
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Very nice. I can see why this would be picked up for a song. Your sister is quite talented.
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Re: Love hurts
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:38:35 AM AEST
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Your sister is very talented........I can hear this in the form a tune........how very lucky for you!
Thank you for sharing!
Poetic hugs
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