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This time
Contributed by
Tanmaya
on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 01:36:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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For this one moment
don’t speak,
till the quiet shadows
dissolve in time,
into the heart of a
black hole.
This time
don’t let me go.
Hold me back with your silence,
for that is what I can
never break free.
This time
make time stay and
forget itself
in our obvious confusion.
Let no one know what we know.
Let’s trap ourselves inside
some life that is free
like a feather,
inside some moment,
lighter than a petal…
escaping our open hands
and falling at our feet.
This time
we’ll fly
higher than the winds,
where the purest stars
wait for us
in silence…
and weep.
Copyright ©
Tanmaya
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2004-07-26 01:36:33]
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Re: This time
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by venkat on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:08:01 AM AEST
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Interesting imagery..it seems black hole which brings death to stars was taken as a symbol to indicate the state of timelessness or to indicate some obvious confusion, any way the idea to fly higher than purest stars is adorable but for the reason they weep..
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Re: This time
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 12:45:44 PM AEST
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so gentle, so moving, truely beautiful poem, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: This time
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 01:38:37 PM AEST
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Sounds like a vortex of oblivion. Not quite sure I am getting the true meaning here.
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Re: This time
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by pvd on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 09:44:27 PM AEST
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You present images quite wel, but are you talking about two lovers or mankind ... an interesting thought that you as a poet do not have to explain. Nice piece.
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Re: This time
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 03:36:07 AM AEST
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I think this speaks of something much deeper than it tells. Sad, and moving. Nice work!
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Re: This time
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 03:55:25 PM AEST
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In reading this, I was carried to another world. I don't know where I was, but I loved it. Thank you very much.
Take care.
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