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How I Felt
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 10:46:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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How I Felt
I wish I never told you
How I felt
I'm afraid of rejection still
The pain slowly dwindles
Away, but I still remember
Each day I couldn't take it
Keeping everything inside
Thought I'd find an outlet
But I was denied
With repeats the past
And is refreshed inside
And killing me like I died
I told you how I felt
You said it was too soon
For me to love you
And that was the last
I heard from you
Since I told you how I felt
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2004-07-25 22:46:35]
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Re: How I Felt
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:20:20 PM AEST
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Ouch!! That must have hurt!!
Good read....
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Re: How I Felt
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by Gentledove on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:33:49 PM AEST
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Awww, putting yourself out there took courage. This person obviously doesen't have any courage. Good write.
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Re: How I Felt
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 12:43:17 PM AEST
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awww... i am still glad about the times i have put my heart on the line, i figure better said than not, for then how would one ever know? great write:) hugs n' love nessa
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