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Jagged Pills
Contributed by
xemptydecemberx
on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 07:18:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Empty bottle on the floor
A chair jammed up against my door
Hiding away so you cannot see
What is about to happen to me
No one has come to check, thats no suprise
The tears that leak from these eyes
As I take these pills one by one
Till this is over I'll be done
I reread the label "do not exceed"
But I've taken far more than I'll need
6 in 24..thats not alot
29 pills later, and I never got caught
I take them slowly to keep count
To end the nothing, I'll never amount
To anything ever, its all the same
and Im the only one to blame
My eyes get heavy, they start to drop
In a few seconds my pulse shall stop
I clutch the chair, and fall to the floor
There was nothing left to live for....
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xemptydecemberx
... [
2004-07-25 19:18:03]
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Re: Jagged Pills
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:23:32 PM AEST
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something i've thought about many times...great job...i can see it all happening...
summer |
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Re: Jagged Pills
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 09:56:28 PM AEST
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| there have been so many times when i wanted to do that. but i never could. i hope you never do. peace n love. your friend jenny |
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Re: Jagged Pills
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by screwup on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 03:47:15 PM AEST
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Jacque,
hey girlie... AMAZING*poem ... sorry it took so long to get my comment on his one... but you are one hell of a poet... all of your poems are just as good if not better than the next.
~Deanna |
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