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Contributed by
shorty_52
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Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 03:03:07 PM in AEST
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i look in your eyes
and what i see is love
and when u look into mine
it's what i hope u see.
it is there
as it always will be.
my feelings for u
will last for eternity.
and when you touch me
i feel the warmth of ur love
the softness of ur skin
it's all i ever want.
to see you in the doorway
standing quiet as could be
watching my every move
as if i'm all u want to see
i love you so very much
as i hope u do to me.
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Re: you
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by mdmorash on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 03:11:26 PM AEST
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| Nicely done. Full of emotion, bravo. |
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Re: you
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by brew on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 05:42:41 PM AEST
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| Seems the key word is LOVE for all........Good writing.....Love can be powerful! |
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Re: you
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 12:16:28 PM AEST
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very loving, beautifully heartfelt, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: you
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by Vermillion on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 04:09:30 PM AEST
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I seldemly like love poetry but BRAVO i seriously enjoyed this piece thoroughly.filled with real emotion and very heart warming.keep up the good work
~vermillion~ |
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