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Daylight
Contributed by
hooray_its_jen
on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 02:57:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The darkness slips
Into a sunrise,
A red-orange glow
When moonlight dies.
Above the trees
In the morning skies,
Now darkness whispers
Its daily good-byes.
Sunlight hits
The moist ground,
The air is suddenly
Filled with sound.
The birds wake us,
Their songs resound
And it seems
I’m almost spellbound.
Wouldn’t it be nice
If each and every day
Would start itself out
In this same way?
For lately it seems
Darkness will stay
And daylight hides
Until it goes away.
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2004-07-25 14:57:56]
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Re: Daylight
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by kandyklown999 on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 04:01:50 PM AEST
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| wow this is a good one....TALENT!!! |
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Re: Daylight
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by Gentledove on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 05:05:02 PM AEST
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A very nice write Jen.
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Re: Daylight
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by pvd on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 08:15:46 PM AEST
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Nice ryhme scheme. This a thoughtful piece.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Daylight
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 08:26:41 PM AEST
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I think this is one of your best pieces so far that I have read, Jenna. I know life has been rough for you lately, but the sun will shine brighter again. "Rememer the old say, it is always darkest before the dawn." Hugs to you.
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Re: Daylight
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by pixie on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 10:31:57 AM AEST
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wow , i loved this one...... a great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Daylight
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 12:12:48 PM AEST
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truely beautiful...... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Daylight
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by arden on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 10:07:13 AM AEST
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seems rather sad in a way. but this was indeed a very beautiful and touching write. im sorry to admit i havent read any or your work, but now im planing on reading it from now on, you've got talent. i look forward to reading more. 5 stars. i liked this one alot.
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