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Shape To What I Hold Inside
Contributed by
PieceOfABrokenSoul
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Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 01:30:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I hate myself for all the things I’ve said,
But your words make it seem to you I’m dead.
I miss you beyond all reason,
That my heart should long for Eden.
I don’t care for those around you,
They, I can easily break through.
I don’t know why,
But I will love you until we meet sky high.
And there, in the night of the day,
My heart should show the way,
To paradise.
You just need to suffice,
To what I hold inside.
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PieceOfABrokenSoul
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2004-07-25 13:30:36]
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Re: Shape To What I Hold Inside
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by pixie on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 01:55:21 PM AEST
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very sad write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Shape To What I Hold Inside
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 12:58:32 PM AEST
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Very sad write. I hope you are feeling better soon. Keep writing it out, it gets better with time.
Angel always...joni |
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