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Love Stole
Contributed by
lovespoetic0518
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Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 12:04:29 PM in AEST
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Your everything I know,
What I haunt, What I want,
All hidden in your soul.
Hide it away, keep it safe,
Your eyes let it show.
Dissolve your dreams,
Store them with me,
Our minds in control.
Together we stride,
Let eachother inside,
Our hearts love stole.
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2004-07-25 12:04:29]
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Re: Love Stole
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by pixie on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 12:08:00 PM AEST
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awwwww sweet poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Love Stole
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 12:37:32 PM AEST
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sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: Love Stole
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by WinterFawn on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 10:12:02 AM AEST
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Very soft and loving verse. You have expressed your love beautifully with this write.
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Re: Love Stole
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by Sagacious on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:51:24 AM AEST
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| I love the idea expressed in the lines, "Dissolve your dreams, / Store them with me." In them, a sense of spiritual communion is eloquently manifested. Though, I would ask: is this really a stolen love? One can't steal from the willing, after all. In any case, a lovely celebration of life's grandest gift: one steadfast partner, in everlasting love. Beautiful! -KAC- |
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Re: Love Stole
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by SocialMisfit on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 09:54:48 AM AEST
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this was nice ty for sharing such a calm and loveing poem
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