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You Were My Everything
Contributed by
imlostbutloved69
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Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 10:12:54 AM in AEST
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My soul, cold, like the underside of a pillow
My eyes, crying, like a weeping willow
All of this because of you
So don't tell me my love isn't true
My heart, broken, like a china dish
All of this, shattered, just like every wish
My gace, iced, by all these tears
My mind, stunned, by all these fears
Look what our break-up did to me
Now do you really see
My body, numb, like frostbite
My heart, in love, from thinking about you every night
My life, dangling, from a string
Did you know you were my everything?
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2004-07-25 10:12:54]
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Re: You Were My Everything
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by AspenGlow on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 12:34:40 PM AEST
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Sometimes they do and sometimes they don't, but the pain in our hearts and souls, and time is the one who takes it away, eases the pain, and erases the blame. And brings hearts to be with love again in time.
Very good write, thank you for sharing. |
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Re: You Were My Everything
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by critterhideaway on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 04:47:54 PM AEST
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| Time heals the pain it is said. But sometimes it lingers for awhile, Very good write |
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Re: You Were My Everything
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by TwEeK on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:40:28 PM AEST
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I wrote one by the same title a while ago too..
i like yours better than mine i must say.
dont worry, theres plenty of fishs in the sea.
Tweek |
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