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Suicide Game
Contributed by
diamond_tears
on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 09:58:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sitting alone in a room,
Darkness is my only friend.
What have I done to deserve,
This very sticky end?
Sitting with my blade,
And a bottle of pills.
Let’s have a race,
See which one kills.
One cut,
One pill.
Two cuts,
Two pills.
It’s going to be a long game.
Well… I have all night.
The winner:
The one who kills me,
Before sunrise.
On your marks,
Get set,
Go…
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diamond_tears
... [
2004-07-25 09:58:25]
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Re: Suicide Game
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by pixie on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 10:53:50 AM AEST
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very grim and dark write, I am sorry for your pain,
pixie xx |
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Re: Suicide Game
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:26:07 AM AEST
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| Hmmm... I like this one. Very dark, yet disturbingly playful. I've had nights like this. I really loved your poem. It really brought out the numbness and how it can seem so unreal. But it was truely wonderful. Great job! |
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Re: Suicide Game
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by PurpleMoonJuice on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 06:58:14 PM AEST
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****huggles****
love you xxxx |
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Re: Suicide Game
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by teagy03 on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:56:45 PM AEST
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I know how you feel...Great poem
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Re: Suicide Game
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:54:34 PM AEST
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Wow, i really liked that one
very dark
x |
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Re: Suicide Game
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by Kevin on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:05:35 PM AEST
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Honestly that poem gave me the chills, scary...
-Kevin |
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Re: Suicide Game
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by 8kiwi8 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:44:15 AM AEST
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| wow!! that was ace! i always know exactly why i like certain poems but can never put it into words!!i think its cool that although its dark and depressing it shows you're not completely dark n depressed you still have fun(game) love ya lotz cya soon kayli x x x |
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Re: Suicide Game
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 07:08:19 AM AEST
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a knife felt like it cut ME ouch..
you wrote it clear and to the point!
glad it is was a game.
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Re: Suicide Game
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by GothicGrrl666 on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 10:59:40 AM AEST
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| Wow I know how you feel...*tear* I feel that way sometimes....I loves ur poem....LOVED it. |
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