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(no title)....
Contributed by
hawaii06
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Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 09:24:06 AM in AEST
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Dreaming of looking into your eyes,
being able to hold you and be with you.
Wanting to hug and kiss you.
Loving you for you and having you love me for me.
Visions of us racing through my head.
I love the feeling I get whenever I'm tlaking to you.
I feel whole and complete,
like somebody finally cares.
I've waited for so long to be cared about,
and it finally feels like it's coming true.
It feels good to know someone who doesn't
judge physically but emotionally and intellectually as well.
It finally feels as though someone will listen to the
way I feel.
It seems as though I can give you advice,
and whenever I need it, I can come to you.
You are so wonderful and I'm glad I met you!
Thank you!
Jamie Burkholder
It feels good to know someone
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Re: (no title)....
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 10:35:59 AM AEST
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| Nice write! Maybe *Loving Visions* would be a good title? |
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by hooray_its_jen on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 10:58:30 AM AEST
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Very nice write! I agree with timebot, *loving whatever* (I'm having memory problems lately) would be a nice title. Great write, I enjoyed it.
Blessings
Love, Jenna |
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by RavenShadows on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 11:04:19 AM AEST
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| I like "loving Visions" as well. This is very nicely written. |
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by whisper-of-night on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 05:44:53 PM AEST
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| hey hun, its been such a long time, how are you? ^.^ |
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