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WEIRD....HUNH?
Contributed by
hawaii06
on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 09:10:38 AM in AEST
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This warm sensation is pulsating
through my body.
It's taking over my mind,
making me feel queasy.
Disrupts my thoughts,
Changes my mind,
Makes me think,
Always leaves me wondering.
Dreaming things unbelievable
Strange ideas raging through me
Leaving me confused; stuck.
Leaving my thoughts tangled.
My mind distraught; my body dimented;
My thoughts dilapidated.
In an odd way all these weird things make me feel...
SAFE
Jamie Burkholder
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hawaii06
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2004-07-25 09:10:38]
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Re: WEIRD....HUNH?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:17:41 AM AEST
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| Nice self-awareness poetry. Some of us do feel safer when we have changes going on. |
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Re: WEIRD....HUNH?
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:22:51 AM AEST
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Know the feelings only too well...good write..
Jenni |
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Re: WEIRD....HUNH?
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by forgottensorrow on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 08:13:27 PM AEST
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I know the feeling, I liked how you described everything and how you could make it flow at the same time.
Good write.
.:.Chrissy.:. |
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Re: WEIRD....HUNH?
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by Jester on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 08:27:11 AM AEST
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| Lol *two thumbs up* I can see where you are coming from with that one.........you should probably cover that up :D |
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