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DROWNED IN SIN )-; ;-) *†*
Contributed by
ChinaRivera
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Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 12:44:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
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;-( )-; ;-) *†* (-; ;-( )-; ;-) *†* (-; ;-( )-; ;-) *†* (-; ;-( )-; ;-) *†* (-; ;-( )-; ;-) *†* (-; ;-( )-; ;-) *†* (-;
Drowned in sin. Mentally bleeding.
Slowly death is exceeding. A tight embrace around the throat. Like as if ones being choked. The heart tightened, then shattered to pieces.
Demons suck life out like leeches. Deep down inside, the soul screeches. Unfortunately, theres no help around. No one heard the moaning sounds. One failed to reach where grace abounds.
Turning from sin! Turning life around! So ones soul suffocated and drowned. One kept their sinful ways willingly. Continuously walking down evils treacherous path corrupts every
part of lifes grasp. Thats unrepentent sins aftermath. Now is harder to breath! one yelps and gasps. One shouldnt have thrown their life in the trash! One thinks nothing of the
spirit when they should have embraced it, loved it, and feared it. Instead one sometimes chooses to meet doom! Pulled into where dark shadows loom! Now they*re forever in a terror spell.
Sadly condemned to eternal hell.
;-( )-; ;-) *†* (-; ;-( )-; ;-) *†* (-; ;-( )-; ;-) *†* (-; ;-( )-; ;-) *†* (-; ;-( )-; ;-) *†* (-; ;-( )-; ;-) *†* (-;
Copyrights © 2004 By China Rivera
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ChinaRivera
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Re: DROWNED IN SIN )-; ;-) *†*
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by shelby on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:07:24 AM AEST
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intense write
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Re: DROWNED IN SIN )-; ;-) *†*
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by Vermillion on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:14:10 AM AEST
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i am left speechless that was a profound write and brutally intense.please keep up the good work
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Re: DROWNED IN SIN )-; ;-) *†*
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by ChinaRivera on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:26:14 AM AEST
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| Thank you! ;-) I Try My Best! |
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Re: DROWNED IN SIN )-; ;-) *†*
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by flamingblade on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 03:07:45 PM AEST
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very intense
all I can say
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