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Superman
Contributed by
stubbo87
on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 12:21:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I want to be your superman
I want to save your day
I want to be your spiderman
I wanna carry you away
Let me be the hero this time
Don’t fly away without me
Let me wear the cape this time
Bravery is the key
You always protect me
You wipe away my tears
I want to protect you
Let me face your fears
I’m not just a little girl
I can hold my own
There’s a woman inside of me
She just wants to be shown
Let me test the water babe
I promise I’ll be fine
I don’t like this safety net
I want to cross the line
I want to cry I want to laugh
But I want to on my own
I’m strong and independent
Not another little clone
Let me see you cry for once
What makes you afraid?
Tell me your troubles and your fears
I’ll help them all to fade
I promise I will catch you
Every time you fall
If only you will promise me
You’ll be there if I call
Copyright ©
stubbo87
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2004-07-25 00:21:07]
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Re: Superman
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by Gentledove on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 12:34:04 AM AEST
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A wonderful write. Had a nice flow.
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Re: Superman
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 12:34:46 AM AEST
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Wow..I loved this......especially the last verse..
Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net.... Hope to read more from you...
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Re: Superman
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by Vermillion on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:08:43 AM AEST
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i loved this poem. a nice gentle flow,well chosen words and so lovley done.
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Re: Superman
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by RavenShadows on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 11:05:49 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem. Very well written and very easy to relate to. |
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