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Your Breaking Heart
Contributed by
Essentially9
on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 12:03:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Your Breaking Heart
In you I break and shatter
Everything that ever mattered
I am the frozen water
That breaks your heart apart
In the end you'll have no heart
As it tears itself apart
As I shatter
Everything that mattered
Remember I am the water
That broke your heart apart
Unlike blood I leave a mark
I then leave scars
Upon your heart
As it breaks apart
My intention from the start
For you to have no heart at all
Because of the scars
You left upon my heart
Your intention from the start
Your blood runs thin
As I shatter your heart within
I'm killing you in the end
Your stone heart gives in
And shatters into oblivion
You die within
You paid for what you did
Copyright ©
Essentially9
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2004-07-25 00:03:48]
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Re: Your Breaking Heart
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by theMoth on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 03:09:07 PM AEST
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| Another hopeless kindred soul. Nice to meet you, keep up the good writing.--the Moth |
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Re: Your Breaking Heart
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:11:36 PM AEST
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i seem to know about this a bit..it really got to me this one here..
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Re: Your Breaking Heart
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 05:39:53 PM AEST
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definitely dark...and painful. not so much for you...but for the one that paid for what they did. i like how it's reversed...it's thier breaking heart...not yours. definitely an amazing write
- Bethani - |
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