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Patched Glass
Contributed by
stubbo87
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Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:40:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The shattered glass
Is patched again
Along with my heart
The broken mirror
Is whole again
Like it never fell apart
But how can that happen?
The impossible come true?
Who knew?
Who could have?
Only you
The dead man
Is alive again
Every single body part
All the corrupt
Are innocent again
Like they were at the start
Why’d you do it?
Gave them all a second chance?
All the while leading us on
Then dropping me right here
With a pile of your patched glass
Copyright ©
stubbo87
... [
2004-07-24 23:40:53]
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Re: Patched Glass
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by Vermillion on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:44:56 PM AEST
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that was a really good read with well thought out emotion.keep up the good work
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Re: Patched Glass
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 12:02:16 AM AEST
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very sad, beautifully written, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Patched Glass
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 12:15:06 AM AEST
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Intriquing piece here. Even I would like to know what the answer was. Why was the glass broken to begin with, lol. You write well and draw the reader into the story. I will be watching for more of your work.
Smiles,
Rita |
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