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The Gazing Owl
Contributed by
Vermillion
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Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:27:48 PM in AEST
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The Gazing Owl
sleeping deep like in a mothers womb
awakening to the noise "who...who"
my head is throbbing and my heart trembling
pieces of my mind i am assembling
like a jigsaw puzzle that fell to the floor
and the glimmers of light shining in through the door
im out in the forest and no one is there
i here a noise and look up into the air
i see a two spheres glowing the brightest green
it is an owl up in the old oak tree
gazing upon me in my current condition
gazing and waiting to feed his blood addiction
who...
who...
where am i going where have i been?
stumbling through the darkness where do i live?
the flapping wings of the night
stumbling through the woods trying to regain my sight
who...
who...
the questions the owl is asking,directed at me
or to a mate of which i do not see
the maze of bushes and blood in my eyes
to find a corner to which i can hide
who...
who...
again the owl follows
content on my sorrow
screaming in vain
bleeding with pain
who...
who...
those green eyes of night
a shivering sight
the horror i cry
a question i cant deny
who...
who...
who am i?
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Vermillion
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Re: The Gazing Owl
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by PumpkinPie on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:36:36 PM AEST
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Beautifully expressed and a very different read,I enjoyed this very much.Keep posting,
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Re: The Gazing Owl
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by shelby on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 12:13:10 AM AEST
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I know Im always in for a grand surprise when I read your work once again I enjoyed this!
Michelle |
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Re: The Gazing Owl
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by pixie on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 10:34:02 AM AEST
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such a great write, as always
pixie xx
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Re: The Gazing Owl
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 10:11:09 PM AEST
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Nice,,Love the ending..
Whisper |
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Re: The Gazing Owl
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by shorty_52 on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 09:49:04 PM AEST
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crazy. this is really good. i cant wait to read ur stuff in the future. keep up the good work. its'all very good
~allyson~ |
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Re: The Gazing Owl
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 11:54:06 AM AEST
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A new masterpiece from you. This is a little different from your usual. I liked it alot.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: The Gazing Owl
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by xXxFaygoFetishxXx on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 04:18:24 PM AEST
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I am continually amazed with your poetry. You are an amazing writer. I love the ending to this poem.
::Elizabeth:: |
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Re: The Gazing Owl
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 08:43:06 PM AEST
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| sweet poem, and i LOVE the ending, perfect way to end it. koolness |
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