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Homicidal Tendencies
Contributed by
Vermillion
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Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:18:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Homicidal Tendencies
you know there are times
times when i look back and wonder why?
why did i do the things i did
and why did i enjoy them so?
the look,the feel
holding that knife,pointing that gun
the smell of the decomposing corpse
rotting away in the bath tub with my unique brand of acids
there are nights when i have insomnia
then there are nights when i sleep deep
deep as a child dying in her mothers arms
sometimes ill bash my head against the wall
bash it so hard im knocked unconscious
just anything to block out the undying screaming
the unholy screaming that plagues me
the sounds,those chilling screams of my little brother
as i watched him commit suicide
when we were little we'd play in the mountains
there was a cliff facing down into a shallow creek
one day he stood at its edge and stretched out his arms
whispering to himself he wanted to hug god
the sun light hit him in such a way his shadow was cast over me
his shadow enveloped me with its darkness
i reached out my arm and yelled "NO!"
and he replied "dont worry god will catch me"
then i saw him fall....
screaming those unholy chilling screams
having to coupe with his lose was mind shattering
i saw his lifeless corpse at the creek side
brains and blood scattered in a spherical shape
still leaking into the brown shallow creek
soon after that i had this mind numbing itch
i started cutting my hands and side with a sharp kitchen knife
soon i took it to my parents throat
i knew they blamed me for my brothers death
said i pushed him,pushed him to sure death
now theres this constant itching deep in my soul
i have to scratch it with my knife,with a gun
with anything that can kill....
i need to feel the souls leave the body and the heart stop beating
put my mouth over theirs and still their last breath
like the indians did with deer after chasing them down
every time i stick a knife in someones belly
or put a hollow point in their head
i scratch that soul itch i have
sometimes i even see my brothers face
or his great decent into the unknown
lusting for the blood to flow free
please god someone help me
19.20.5.16.-9.14.19.9.4.5.
13.25.-13.21.12.20.9.16.12.5.-13.9.14.4.19.
3.15.13.5.-9.14.19.9.4.5.
1.19.25.12.21.13.-8.9.7.8.
Copyright ©
Vermillion
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2004-07-24 23:18:30]
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Re: Homicidal Tendencies
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by shelby on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 12:18:44 AM AEST
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intense and I think you scared me again geezz
michelle |
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Re: Homicidal Tendencies
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by pixie on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 10:38:00 AM AEST
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wow , this is bloody amazing,....
pixie xx |
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Re: Homicidal Tendencies
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by deadbloodyrose on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 12:23:00 AM AEST
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| *gasps* amazing.. very well written.. i know how to decode the bottom *sighs* im too tired and lazy at the moment ill do it later.. i love this piece its so powerful..take care.. AMI JO |
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Re: Homicidal Tendencies
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by shorty_52 on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 09:42:12 PM AEST
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wow. this is so intense. i saw it all happen. it was crazy. damn ur so good and making people see what u wrote about. i loved it as usual. good write. keep up the good work.
~allyson~ |
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Re: Homicidal Tendencies
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 08:37:53 PM AEST
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| i dont get what the numbers are at the end. awesome poem, there's a lot of poems about the brother committing suicide, i'm wondering if that that happened to you, or if it's just something you like to add in your poems. anways, that's so good a poem, very descriptive and i like how it's an itch. cuz you have to itch itches... |
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