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Promise me
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 06:45:00 AM in AEST
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To scared to close my eyes
Yet what I see causes me great pain
Too scared to walk alone
Yet too scared to tell anyone
Why do I let you have to power over me?
You are just a scared little boy
You are going to try and over power me
Go straight ahead
I will even let you
You have to promise me that you will leave my friends alone
You’re not yourself
That’s no excuse
Still do what you wish to me
You just have to promise me that you will leave my friends alone
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Re: Promise me
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 06:52:44 AM AEST
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Anyone who causes you fear is no one you want to be with. Get rid of the bum. ;o) Larry
btw Very intense write! Well done again |
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Re: Promise me
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by ginsdance on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 12:43:25 PM AEST
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I know how you feel. That first line "to scared to close my eyes..."... believe me, I've been there. The best thing to do is to get out of that situation... you'd be surprised how fast he will leave your friends alone with a restraining order...
Ginnie |
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Re: Promise me
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 11:27:07 AM AEST
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| i like this one, good write |
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