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Alabaster Box
Contributed by
kurt17cobain
on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 09:13:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Inside of me there is this box
Full of feeling and emotion
All priceless to you
At certain times I break this box
and sprinkle upon your heart its contents
and you are left with the aroma of my love
And every day I want you to bask in this
a thing called love
This Alabaster Box will never run empty
Copyright ©
kurt17cobain
... [
2004-07-24 21:13:11]
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Re: Alabaster Box
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by xxbreathlessx on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 09:19:09 PM AEST
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wow, short and awesome..i loved it!
especially the lines:
"And every day I want you to bask in this
a thing called love"
amazing job, keep writing!
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Re: Alabaster Box
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 04:57:55 AM AEST
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Nice write. It is clear and contains the right notions for me to enjoy.
Keep writing.
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Re: Alabaster Box
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:53:29 PM AEST
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Welcome to the best poetry site on the net- YPDC...
I loved this very much..Short and to the point... Lucky recipient...
Jenni |
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Re: Alabaster Box
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by ExoticDreamer on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:20:47 PM AEST
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| A wonderful wonderful token of love and commitment. Well done. |
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