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I like the Hurt
Contributed by
brokensoul
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Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 04:54:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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my icy blood runs through my veins
my heart has turned to a block of ice
glistening, so beautiful
but so cold
how can you leave me here alone like this
you have left me to soak in the dark
well fantastic!
i like the pain
the void i reside in
i will let it stab at me
maybe the grim reaper will come and and give me a couple of hacks
just for a laugh
or maybe the devil can come rape me in a room of fire
i will be his mistress
forget you
*** you
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2004-07-24 16:54:05]
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Re: I like the Hurt
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by diamond_tears on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 05:12:11 PM AEST
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| srange poem but a good one- well done xxx |
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Re: I like the Hurt
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by waos on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 06:04:10 PM AEST
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that's really good. really. i like it, and can almost see myself saying the same things. i like the pain is a good title, cause it fills it all in, and suits it. and of course thats what drew me in right away.
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Re: I like the Hurt
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by pyro_88 on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 06:15:17 PM AEST
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| great poem. |
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