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Numb
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pyro_88
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Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 03:48:21 PM in AEST
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Pushed against a wall.
Hiding from everyone i know.
Everything is going wrong.
Nothing i do is right anymore.
I'm just letting my emotions flow.
I'm loosing control.
Will this pain ever go away?
When did i become so numb?
Will anyone love me?
I'm screaming inside.
I can't hear you anymore.
My minds fed up.
I'm loosing my life.
I've lost all my pride.
I just don't care anymore.
I've become so numb.
I feel nothing.
No joy.
No pain.
Nothing.
I'm dieing inside.
And no one seems to see it.
Numb to everything that comes my way.
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Re: Numb
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 04:47:06 PM AEST
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hello,
this was a great poem,it wasn't just nothing.
you're good at this,and what matters the most is the emotion and feelings you put in it.
so keep your faith and everything will be ok.I CARE,really.there's always someone who loves you,look around and keep writing,it will really help you a lot.kisses n hugs.May GOD bless you,take care.
love always,
andrea |
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Re: Numb
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by diamond_tears on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 05:16:22 PM AEST
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| great poem. reminds me of myself. you write similarly to myself. pm me if u need a chat xx |
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Re: Numb
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by waos on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 06:08:45 PM AEST
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the first line is the one that drew me in the most, cause i can relate to that, because of physically relating to it. that's what happens when i freak out. so i could really relate to this and i think its awesome that you posted it.
and despite you saying that you weren't that good.. i think this rocked, because you put your feelings into it. and thats what poetry is. |
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Re: Numb
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by BrandySwanson on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 07:38:11 PM AEST
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very sad emotional write but you've expressed your feelings well in this poem. this is the two ?ion's I always ask myself
Will this pain ever go away?
Will anyone love me?
I can really relate to this one.thanks for sharing this. [ good job ]
Brandy
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Re: Numb
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:12:39 PM AEST
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| Screaming inside, I love that. I checked this poem out after reading another one of yours called I CAN'T. Both of these poems are so good. Keep writing, keep venting and again get some help please! There are great people out there who will help you. EVERYONE deserves to be treated with kindness, love yourself! Find peace! |
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