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never seen again
Contributed by
darkplaidbabe
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Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 03:39:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Why is it always the wrong way to go from here? Dead ends and long lost roads so often traveled by me.
Without you here it痴 miserable to live, to die, to see.
I知 searching my love, doing my best,
Putting my heart to the test.
But its oh so hard here all alone my love
When will you be home dear, back from above?
I still feel your arms around me, like you never went away
And I keep wanting to believe that you値l be back someday
Though I know like everyone does, that I値l never see your return
You are still all I dream of, and the dieing memories of you burn
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust, no it can稚 be true
You are still here with us; I知 still in love with you
They never found you, no they never did
You might still be alive
Maybe you just ran away, sick of the nine to five
Maybe I値l see you standing there, walking in the rain
Maybe you値l walk up to me and we値l be together again
Maybe we値l dance like we did once, long ago
And all the people will gather round to see the show
And then we値l all rejoice for you will have returned
And every time I get to that part, it fades and again I am concerned
Then the dreaming ends and you are still not here
I am longing for you and I am struck with fear
I still feel you, dancing round me late at night
The things you do make me laugh, and it feels alright
In my dreams you池e back again and we can go on with life
We can find a beautiful house and I can be your wife
But when I wake you池e gone again and nothing is the same
The hopes I had are dashed and cracked against the grain
And here it comes sweeping through me, the searing, screaming pain.
But my darling, wherever you are tonight
I just want you to know,
I still have that ray of light
That never-ending glow
The hope in my soul that you will return and be my baby again
I thought you were a gift from god but soon learned you were only lent
Copyright ﾂｩ
darkplaidbabe
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2004-07-24 15:39:25]
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Re: never seen again
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by kyletycz on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 03:47:17 PM AEST
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| WOW, its sooo hard to comment on somthing as sad as this, but in every moment of pain and agony, your words describe the emotion as best as i have heard, its a very sad thing, but the poem shows the sad thing in a beautiful light...... i hope things turn out for the better for you |
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Re: never seen again
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by trustisajoke on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 05:39:35 PM AEST
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Aww this poems so sad but its so well written my bf dyed this year and i know how you feel but im sorry to hear that i wish the best for you
love-Tracey
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Re: never seen again
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by waos on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 06:20:41 PM AEST
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oh wow yeah that's so sad. man that must tear you up inside.. definitely qualifies as tragic. oh how i wish words could help. good job writing that, it is easy to read, the words fit together very well.. probably like how you and he fit together.
take care.
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Re: never seen again
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by shelby on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:23:13 AM AEST
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words wont comfort you but know that I am sorry you almost haunted me with this write your feelings and hoping came to me clear here I have a similar situation only with a cousin not a boyfriend and the wonder and not knowing rip a person up inside no finality then your mind wanders of the horrible things that may have happened to that loved one then hope they will come back but they dont. I dont know what to say except Im sorry and know how you feel touching write and peaceful blessings be yours.
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Re: never seen again
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by jenny21614 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:19:46 AM AEST
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I'm feel awful for you, but just remember that everything happens for a reason, even if it does seem unfair and pointless right now. Try to look at the bigger picture, and above all NEVER loose that hope. Nothing's final yet. At the same time, don't hold yourself back from living, and don't feel guilty if you are. Thanks for sharing your feelings!
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