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They Were All For You
Contributed by
xCApTiVaTeDx
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Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:08:35 PM in AEST
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The tears I've cried,
The long-lived lies,
-They were all for you.
Through day and night,
Through dark and light,
-They were all for you.
When happy, when sad,
When hurt, when mad,
-They were all for you.
I've done all this,
Nothing shall I miss,
Just 'cuz I love you.
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Re: They Were All For You
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by pixie on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:10:52 PM AEST
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short and straight to the point, I really liked this one... great write tinged with sadness
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Re: They Were All For You
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:26:20 PM AEST
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agreed, the sadness is just barely there. It's one of those writes where I can just image the moment it's been written...
Hugs and best wishes for you and The Antecedent
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Re: They Were All For You
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by BrandySwanson on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 07:48:07 PM AEST
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a little sad but you've written it well great job.
Brandy |
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