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It's All You
Contributed by
xCApTiVaTeDx
on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:05:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Things that you said,
The way that you said it,
It's all your fault,
I give you all credit.
You tricked me hard,
Can't believe i didnt see,
You had no intentions,
But you sure fooled me.
Lost all hope,
Falling hard, fast,
Slipping through this life,
It would never last.
Copyright ©
xCApTiVaTeDx
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2004-07-24 12:05:27]
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Re: It's All You
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by pixie on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:07:41 PM AEST
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great flow, great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: It's All You
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:28:51 PM AEST
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the words give the outline to a scenario or scene that i can imagine like in a movie or something... I can just picture that moment in time... you're very good at doing that (like in another one of your writes i just read, lol)
Again, best wishes and God bless
love,
Ellen |
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