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Song Of The Siren
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:10:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Tis the most beautiful song,
Swirls in your head all day long,
You feel strangely drawn to this voice,
You lose control, you don’t have the choice.
The need to find her is overwhelming,
Inside your desires the Siren is delving,
Calling you to come & join her,
Let go of your inhibitions & your fear.
You’re in two minds over what to do?
Inside you your wanting gently brews,
It is getting harder &harder to resist,
As a Siren’s song is one that’ll persist.
She will not stop until she succeeds,
Upon your weakness she will feed,
Deep down below your fidelity,
Is a need for a Sirens tranquillity.
As you walk toward the sound,
Your feet don’t seem to touch the ground,
She now has you well in her grasp,
This is a feeling that forever will last.
Copyright ©
pixie
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Re: Song Of The Siren
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:46:10 PM AEST
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This is really good, pixie. I wrote a poem based on the same theme (but in a dreamscape) and I must say there's some themes you use here that I have used too. I like the fact that writing about a siren can evoke the same kind of ideas, and inspiration.
I like siren poems, and yours is no exception. Well done, and well-rhymed.
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Re: Song Of The Siren
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:54:50 PM AEST
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i wrote something once about sirens as well : )
it was much shorter though, and more abstract. i'm liking your take on it tremendously... very eerie and what not. many applause ; )
kudos!
Ellen
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Re: Song Of The Siren
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:54:57 PM AEST
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i wrote something once about sirens as well : )
it was much shorter though, and more abstract. i'm liking your take on it tremendously... very eerie and what not. many applause ; )
kudos!
Ellen
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Re: Song Of The Siren
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by katyqueen35 on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:59:35 PM AEST
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I have to say pixie this is an exellent write........well done...
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Re: Song Of The Siren
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 01:18:33 PM AEST
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Enchanting!...No really!
A little scary too to lose all control.
Nicely done pixie! |
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Re: Song Of The Siren
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by nexxa on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 01:19:04 PM AEST
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Another very good write and it seems you are getting into my head again as your title is also a song that brings the feelings you have portrayed in this poem how do you do that Pixie? lol
Thank you again for your wonderful words.
Nexxa
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Re: Song Of The Siren
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by Gentledove on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 05:18:34 PM AEST
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A wonderful write Pixie.
Gentledove |
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Re: Song Of The Siren
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 05:44:32 PM AEST
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Many men have become totally lost in that song. The siren's grasp can only be overcome by the very strong willed men. Men, heed this warning. Great write here.
Rita |
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Re: Song Of The Siren
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 06:53:21 PM AEST
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charming and beautiful, but oh so deadly lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Song Of The Siren
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by Thunderwolf on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 08:33:41 PM AEST
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Nothing like hearing the song of the siren. A cool write.
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Re: Song Of The Siren
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 03:09:20 AM AEST
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Your poem was very well written, the timing perfect.....I enjoyed it thoroughly, but be aware....those sirens you hear may be near, but they denote danger!!!
Loved it
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