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WRITER’S BLOCK
Contributed by
Euphoria
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Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 10:45:15 AM in AEST
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This place, this virgin territory,
The air is alien to me,
Who are these people?
These faces staring into my soul,
These strange eyes that cannot touch my heart,
What land have I stumbled upon?
An eerie fog touches my face,
Finds it way to my mind,
Paralyzes my thoughts,
So the only color I can see is white,
Unexplained anxiety,
Profound insecurity;
Scars my mental process,
The remnants of experiences,
Inspirations, Vindications
Trickle away at the fissures,
Vacuum and a sick smile appears,
Because I cannot say who I am anymore,
It seems the links between my thoughts have broken,
Barren land of restlessness and its morbid air has shrouded me
I am unable to conquer this horrid tranquility,
This deplorable sense of complacency,
That has taken away my vision,
I am unable to write now,
Powerless to feel things for what they really are,
Agility is dead,
Insensitivity reigns,
The dubious designs of life no longer astound me,
The canvas has been set ablaze,
My heart no longer bleeds the colors,
The ink which told my tales,
A gale came this way,
Blew away all the words,
I ever had to say,
Left behind the debris,
And a naked tree,
Staring in the face of eternity,
Waiting for a mizzle,
A drizzle that will give life,
To the contemplation of this yearning soul,
Help it break from the control;
Of a disease called the writer’s block.
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Euphoria
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2004-07-24 10:45:15]
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Re: WRITER’S BLOCK
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by wray on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:03:41 AM AEST
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Whoa.. way to psychoanalyse a simple thing like writer's block!
I'd say the analysis worked, pretty interesting stuff here. The way you described that "horrid tranquility" and "deplorable sense of complacency" really struck home. But I love:
My heart no longer bleeds the colors,
The ink which told my tales, |
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Re: WRITER’S BLOCK
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by AspenGlow on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:29:07 AM AEST
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WOW.......very nice.......I get it and just say I will never write again and only read......you have a way with words!!!!!
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: WRITER’S BLOCK
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by pixie on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:06:01 PM AEST
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wow this is amazing *stands with gob open*
pixie xx |
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Re: WRITER’S BLOCK
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by katyqueen35 on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 01:02:43 PM AEST
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Wow that is an amazing poem....
You put everything together so welll........
well done....... |
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Re: WRITER’S BLOCK
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by BrandySwanson on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 08:00:38 PM AEST
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this was amazingly beautiful. I love it from start to finish. [ terrific job ] deserves 5 stars
Brandy |
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