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Thanks to you,...
Contributed by
xlooseroftomorrowx
on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 09:09:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Im all alone now,all black inside
and i want to die.. but you wont let me
you'd never know now,that my feelings
are because of you
thanks to the things you do..
maybe i wasnt good enough
maybe you never cared..
even though my feelings i shared,the pain i bared
and you never cared?
the possible outcome is that ill use a blade
to forget the shame,erase the pain
and waist away for another day
the possible outcome is that youll come back
and ill take you back
but how do i know you wont you wont hurt my like that
again..
if you have to leave,leave
just stop doing this to me..
because i know i still love you..
but if you loved me too,
why would you hurt me like you do?
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xlooseroftomorrowx
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2004-07-24 09:09:05]
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Re: Thanks to you,...
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 09:18:19 AM AEST
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| i can relate to this one its a good poem but i think u need to use a more wider range of words not bein like citisysing or anything but some words could make it even better thank you for putting ur emotions into its excellent xgripx |
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Re: Thanks to you,...
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by pixie on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 10:21:21 AM AEST
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very emotional write,
pixie xx |
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