|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
goodbye
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 06:18:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
|
i,m sorry i better take all the blame for your mistakes
i,m so ***** sorry i guess i better take it
take all while you throw it in my face
but why am i sorry for these things i,ve never done
i could describe all ur mistakes in perfect detail
because its so ***** hard to forget
that your mother pushed you away
inflicted so much pain
every memories tattooed on this bleeding heart of mine
every word of yours still hurts so much
this is torcher please just put me out of my misery
this is agony please just hold me again
you so sorry aparently never said it to my face
never ever tried to explain
just let me think i was to blame
does you r heart not bleed because i,m not loving you
why don't you ever think of me
i miss you so much mum
and i,m hurting so bad i think i wanna die
loss of so much blodd from his bleeding heart
because of YOU
results in in my last frail breath
as my heart beat stops
this torment will not stop till i,m gone so goodbye
as i grow weaker as the blood drips
my last thought my last hope is that someday you will of loved me
someday you will have wanted me for ur own just how it used to be .
Copyright ©
grip-wth-broken-fingers
... [
2004-07-24 06:18:48]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: goodbye
(User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:14:18 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is great. I liked the way you expressed yourself. I really liked the tattoed bit.
Blu |
|
|
Re: goodbye
(User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 04:24:32 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I was a little thrown by your abrieviated words. Your poem is good and would be better if you wrote evrything completely out. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
