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I HATE YOU
Contributed by
MoonbeamBaby
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Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 09:48:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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YOU LOVE ME THEN PUT ME BACK ON THE SHELF
ALL YOU CARE ABOUT IS YOURSELF
THOUGHT I'D STAY TO
THIS IS WHY I HATE YOU
YOU CALL ME TO LET ME KNOW YOUR NOT HOME
WATCHING YOUR EYES ROAM
ALL WE DO IS ARGUE
THIS IS WHY I HATE YOU
YOU TREAT ME LIKE A FRIEND NOT A GIRLFRIEND
THIS RELATIONSHIP IS GETTING CLOSE TO THE END
I HATE THE THINGS YOU MAKE ME DO
THIS IS WHY I HATE YOU
YOU MAKE ME CRY
YOU MAKE ME WANT TO DIE, AND TELL LIES
YOUR MAKING ME TO BE UNTRUE TO YOU TO.
AND THAT IS WHY I HATE YOU.
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MoonbeamBaby
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2004-07-23 21:48:15]
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Re: I HATE YOU
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 09:53:14 PM AEST
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Caps mean you are yelling the poem at us. The meaning of the poem gets lost in them. It is a fair poem but you are causing the point of it to get lost. Try in regular type next poem. I think you will see the difference.
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Re: I HATE YOU
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 04:36:30 AM AEST
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The anger you feel really leaps out from this.
Sorry for the problems you are having
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Re: I HATE YOU
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by AspenGlow on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 08:15:29 AM AEST
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When the anger cools and we stop and look, its no ones fault but ours you see, the devil can't enter unless we let him in......see first who's at the door knocking...and take a long long look.
Good poem, thanks for sharing, and I like the capitals, no one can say its a happy thought. |
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