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this place?????
Contributed by
shepdog1972
on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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bruised fate..........destiny
glycerine.........
nowhere to go.............
afraid to stay.........
afraid to go............
alone.........
dieing inside...........
fear.....
laothing
when will this end????
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2002-10-27 20:00:00]
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Re: this place?????
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 02:22:30 AM AEST
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| this is a very interesting way to write a poem but i love it! |
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Re: this place?????
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 04:25:07 AM AEST
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| different but i like it, makes you think, nice job. |
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Re: this place?????
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 05:19:00 AM AEST
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| Simple yet complicated . Strong emotions in few words.Very well done! Larry |
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Re: this place?????
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 05:19:00 AM AEST
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| Simple yet complicated . Strong emotions in few words.Very well done! Larry |
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Re: this place?????
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by femme_fatale on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 09:44:47 AM AEST
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| unique style and it kinda hits home a little to close but i like it...steff |
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Re: this place?????
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by rockshv on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 03:01:56 AM AEST
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this really makes sense!!!!
short but makes a good point
;O)
kita |
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Re: this place?????
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 05:29:19 PM AEST
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A great uniquely poem. Very good.
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