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Ocean Of Sadness
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 06:44:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sadness consumes my heart, my soul
Everything has taken its toll
Torn from my body my heart stands alone
As it walks through this life like a field of rose bushes
The thorns rip, cut and tear
So much my heart has taken all it can bare
Im so alone
My heart needs to be sown
There is no thread of acceptance or love
Im not what you think
You dont know how deep in deppression i sink
I cant swin and nobodys there
Nobody there to keep me alive
I am swallowed by the tide,
A wave of deppression
So I will in sadness forever drownd
I will forever, never be found.
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willow_tara72002
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2004-07-23 18:44:02]
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Re: Ocean Of Sadness
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by waos on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 07:03:44 PM AEST
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oh man i can relate to that. i wish i could be there for you to help keep you up and okay, alive. i want you to know that i feel for you. and if you wanted to PM me and add me to MSN or something, that'd be cool.
that poem is good. i really think so. thanks for posting it. |
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Re: Ocean Of Sadness
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by nintool3369 on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 08:29:26 PM AEST
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| god that was quite deepened into your sadness....your so alone in this feeling that you've conveyed here....i like this alot..... |
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Re: Ocean Of Sadness
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by pixie on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 10:52:38 AM AEST
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awww this is so very sad, I am sorry hun, if you need me you know where I am :( *hugs you*
very emotional write.
pixie xx |
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Re: Ocean Of Sadness
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by Kazzy1231 on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 08:19:43 AM AEST
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| Great poem! |
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