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My Promises to You
Contributed by
ginsdance
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Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 07:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Tonight
I have some promises for you,
I can't make all your road ways gold,
But I can show you that the sky is blue,
And I can't take all your problems
And melt them far away,
But I can show you that in the horizon
There is a brand new day.
I can show you that I love you,
I can promise you I'll care,
But I can't alter fate to allow me
To always, just be there.
I can promise to love you forever
Through the good times and the bad,
But I can't say that there will be nothing
To make you sad.
I can promise to kiss your tears away,
And to hold you through the night,
But I can't promise that you'll never cry,
And that everything will always be fine.
I can't say that I'll always be at your side,
Because of things already written in the stars,
But I will promise you one last thing...
Tonight with all it's magic, is ours.
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ginsdance
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2002-10-27 19:15:00]
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Re: My Promises to You
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by Fwog on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 08:05:15 PM AEST
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Well done Ginnie,
what more can one say
Another great write. |
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Re: My Promises to You
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 11:09:34 PM AEST
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| Great write! I wrote one something like this for my hubby, I enjoyed it! Christina |
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Re: My Promises to You
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 02:31:11 AM AEST
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| this a great write! |
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Re: My Promises to You
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 04:29:07 AM AEST
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Great poem,I loved it.
Jackie |
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