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Sexual Empathy
Contributed by
_Raspberry_
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Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 01:49:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Take my hand
And show me the way
Help me to heaven
There we will stay
I see truth
Behind your clouded eyes
That you are earthly heaven
Cleverly disguised
Every single inch of you
Is all I long to touch
I had no idea
That I wanted you so much
Evil and love
A strange combination
Bound at the wrists
Willing incarceration
You drink of me,
I drink of you
Opening boundaries
My walls you see through
FROM love and passion
Created lust
To express our love
Take me...you must
The salty taste
Of your soft skin
Our souls are open
You're deep within
The gray of your eyes
Greedily stare back at me
Newfound lust
Sexual Empathy
I feel I am complete
Now as we explode
We’ve given each other all:
Body, Mind, & Soul
Copyright ©
_Raspberry_
... [
2004-07-23 13:49:00]
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Re: Sexual Empathy
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by MoonbeamBaby on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 01:53:49 PM AEST
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Wow, I loved this poem. Keep writing ILove it
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Re: Sexual Empathy
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 01:55:27 PM AEST
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Very lovely........
Jenni |
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Re: Sexual Empathy
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by LoserLottie on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:51:28 PM AEST
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| It's great. Some of it reminds me off some of my own work! I love all the hiden meanings! keep writing! If you have a chance please read some of my poetry! xxx |
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Re: Sexual Empathy
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by theMoth on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:56:33 PM AEST
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| This is flippin hot! whoa, momma.--the Moth |
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Re: Sexual Empathy
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by RhythmBndt on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 03:23:19 PM AEST
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| Very sexy write :) |
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Re: Sexual Empathy
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by pixie on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:02:01 AM AEST
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wow Raspberry I was blown away by this write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Sexual Empathy
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 08:07:57 PM AEST
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Sure are pushing the envelope here, but I like it.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Sexual Empathy
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by xxbreathlessx on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 08:29:51 PM AEST
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| great poem, awesome writing |
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Re: Sexual Empathy
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:02:25 PM AEST
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Thats a beautiful piece this. I so enjoyed the flow of the words and the little tingles it sent,
Nice write and the end is the bet.
Whisper
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Re: Sexual Empathy
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 11:44:24 AM AEST
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Wow, I'm all out of breath now.
Throw a bucket of cold water over me someone !
But seriously, nice flow of words in this
steve |
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Re: Sexual Empathy
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by lovesucks on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:30:37 AM AEST
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| Little hot??? thanks.....really enjoyed this hope to have it soon |
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Re: Sexual Empathy
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:35:25 PM AEST
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wow that was awesome....i absolutely loved it!!!!......great write
Lots of Love
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