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i am me, you are you
Contributed by
paula_kay23
on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 09:33:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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i am me and i am strong
i am me and i belong
i am me you wont succeed
i am me with dignity
you are you, and play the part
you are you, play with hearts
you are you,play the game
you are you, will live in shame
i am me, i know the game
i am me, i know no shame
i am me, i dont take part
i am me, i have a heart
you are you, and still play
you are you, want your way
you are you, will not rest
you are you, want no less
i am me, will not play
i am me, for another day
i am me, i am true
i am me, better than you
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Re: i am me, you are you
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 10:00:52 AM AEST
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| Nice write. A lot of us are raised with criticism from the moment we're old enough to speak. It's a hard habit to break. |
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Re: i am me, you are you
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 10:13:46 AM AEST
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Nice work i used to suffer from what i call youngest child syndrom, where my brothers and sisters would judge me and critisize me at every opportunity so i can really identify with this one.
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Re: i am me, you are you
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by wray on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 11:33:52 AM AEST
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| Insightful words and an interesting technique, the repetition was heaps effective. I must have missed the sarcasm though... |
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Re: i am me, you are you
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 01:09:29 PM AEST
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Very well said!!!! I feel the same way...
Jenni |
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