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If It Is What You Say It Is
Contributed by
Jellybellyprincess
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Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 09:11:34 AM in AEST
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If home is where the heart is like you say it is
Then take me home
and take me with you
If you say that the fight is getting harder to fight
Don't fight it
and take me with you
If my eyes are looking like you say they are
Then don't ignore them much longer
and take me with you
If the past is getting harder to put behind you
Let me help push it back
and take me with you
Just take me with you
If you say so
Take me with you
if it is what you say it is
Copyright ©
Jellybellyprincess
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2004-07-23 09:11:34]
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Re: If It Is What You Say It Is
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 09:24:09 AM AEST
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Really lovely concept and good write, Ellen...
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Re: If It Is What You Say It Is
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 10:25:20 AM AEST
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you can actually imagine saying this to someone, like dialogue from a great play, excellent well done.
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Re: If It Is What You Say It Is
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by wray on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 11:54:35 AM AEST
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| Hmm good for a song. Not sure if the last line sits right with me for a closing but the first 2 stanzas really appeal. |
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