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beautiful curse
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 06:42:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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i wake,
and the only past dreams that float out the open window,
our of you,
your tender face,
your beautiful smile,
your lips,that i have so many times touched,
i love you,
i know it doesnt seem much,
to give you all the space in my heart,
the key to come and go,
however far away,
im touched,
beautifulily cursed by you,
my heart flutters always,
and i know inside you've unlocked me once again,
and you hold the key close to your heart,
i fall into a deep sleep of love,
memories,dreams,dreams,reality
i feel so overwhelmed by you,
its a cure
a beautiful curse
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Hannah_Heaven
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2004-07-23 06:42:28]
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Re: beautiful curse
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 08:10:46 AM AEST
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Nice write............and I dont think there are any rules about love, so perhaps you are never too young
steve |
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Re: beautiful curse
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 09:21:32 AM AEST
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if you've truly found love then i'm so happy for you. it's rare, even when you ARE what society would call "the right age"... but i think it's true, love can touch anyone.
this is a beautiful poem Hannah ; )
best of wishes to you both.
love,
Ellen |
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Re: beautiful curse
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by kammie on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 01:22:42 PM AEST
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hannah its brill i love it !!!!!
c ya 2moro if i cum dwn fone me l8a so we can arange it lol xxxxxxxxkammie xxx |
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