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A Rainbow
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 05:08:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The rain was coming down
the sun was shining too
You looked up in the sky
A Rainbow in front of you
What a wonderful sight
up there in the sky
All of this happening
right before your eyes
How lucky did you get
to witness such an event
Truly God's creation
that only, God could have sent
Up here in the mountains
you never know, what comes next
Not often to predictable
or written in any text
Everyday is different
maybe some sun, rain or snow
But the fresh air is fantastic
and this you surely know
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-07-23 05:08:16]
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Re: A Rainbow
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by WinterFawn on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 06:35:53 AM AEST
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Vivid description of God's beauty. A rainbow is truly a magnificent sight. Beautifully composed verse.
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Re: A Rainbow
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by pixie on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 08:25:46 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful write Bruce...
pixie xx |
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Re: A Rainbow
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by brew on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 10:05:48 AM AEST
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| Rainbows are beautiful........all the colors that represent many differ anowlogies of all. I wrote one on rainbows.not very good, but was my opinion, what all the differ colors ..mean! Thanks for the nice poem! |
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Re: A Rainbow
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 11:32:09 AM AEST
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oh so sweet this write, rainbows are something i love too, and living in mounatins, as well, yes, your right, you never know what you may see:) hugs n' love nessa
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