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So Real To Me
Contributed by
ashleyglo14
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Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 06:15:00 PM in AEST
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I feel your love coming in,
your very touch pulsating my skin.
How can they say
that you are not for real,
that you the true deal?
That you are just a
figment of my imagination,
to keep with all the animation
going round me now.
Just something to give me hope
and happiness for a better day.
And you do! But, you
are so much more!
So hold me and keep me
Lord.
And help them to find
who you really are, to
find what you are really about.
Oh Lord,
erase all their doubt.
Copyright ©
ashleyglo14
... [
2002-10-27 18:15:00]
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Re: So Real To Me
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by Daniel on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 06:24:22 AM AEST
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| wowsers, i haven't read something like this in a LOOONG time now. i'm so glad you wrote this, made my day. kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: So Real To Me
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 06:38:56 AM AEST
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| Beautiful write Ashley! |
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Re: So Real To Me
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by nay on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 08:23:58 AM AEST
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| It's really deep. I can relate to it. |
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