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Break me an iceberg

Contributed by YPDC_Group_Writes on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 01:03:05 AM in AEST
Topic: group



* * *

When mind turns into an iceberg
Who kisses me with fires of love
That burn like flares fired o'er the prow
Of my titanic inner struggles? You know
I love you in the most inconceivable way
Take my hand lest this ice cold grip slips out
Hold my thoughts and hold my heart
Caress these shivers of pain out of me
My ice cold eyes burn hot with desire
Tongues of love lashing me with fire
Torture of life imprisons my soul in despair
Titonic of hope drowns me in a sea of failure
Release this chained heart from within withered ice,
Why does my love for you carry such a heavy price?
Where is the key that I long for?
Is it far away at your heart’s’s door?
But far is the word that's worded well
Only you could get me out of this hole in which I've fell
You make me reach out with a smile
Say words of love to drive me out of this hole
And to release me from this torturing hell
Won't you kiss me in a passion's swell?
Let your love thaw my frozened heart,
Let me hold you close never to part,
Till the morning breaks with sweet laughter of dawn
And our hearts of love dance in heavenly sunshine!

~O~




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Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 01:17:22 AM AEST
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~:*wow and wow*:~ !!! great collaboration all of you!! a stuuning beautiful poem !! hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 01:18:07 AM AEST
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I couldn't find a link to Mick on main page..
I have posted this under Y.P.D.C group poets..but..this has appeared under my account..Ooh..I have not expected this any way this may not be acceptable to others.
But sincerely I express my sorry for the inconvenience caused to other poets.
Soo sorry..
venkat


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 01:27:06 AM AEST
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Lol venkat dont worry about it.
You did fine........:-)


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by Gentledove on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 01:47:08 AM AEST
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Kudos to you all. A wonderful write.
Gentledove


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:06:27 AM AEST
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well done...wonderful write...cudos to all

Shari


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 05:30:24 AM AEST
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Awesome Venkat, this poem you started turn into a beautiful work of art, Thank you allowing me to be part of the magic created by a wonderful team effort.
Ie:its posted for all to see now, it matters not if how or where, as long as it is out there....

Take care Everyone
A friend to all
Kindredblood dragon


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 06:03:31 AM AEST
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Cool! We did good! :-)


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 08:34:13 AM AEST
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this is a really brilliant group write, *hugs you all*

pixie xx


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 08:55:23 AM AEST
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Venkat!! you changed my lines! it's okay though *smiles* still came out good....



Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 09:09:04 AM AEST
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amazing.
you all did a beautiful job. a very lovely and awesome poem.
5 stars to you all.
i enjoyed this.
Arden


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 09:32:01 AM AEST
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Wow! This is breathtaking.
And amazing write!
Well done all of you!
*hugs you all*
Phil xxx


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 10:39:47 AM AEST
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very , very good work i don't know if that's meant to be a bit of a pun getting the word titanic in a poem with iceberg in the title!
This is an exceptional piece.

wildejohnny.


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:19:39 PM AEST
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A very hot piece of ice this poem is, makes the soul wish to be in that dawn so warm.

Beautiful work, thank you all for sharing.


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 11:01:38 PM AEST
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Wow, you guys did an amazing job. This is so beautiful. This is definitely the product of one awesome collaboration.
* Smiles with much pride *


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 12:06:06 AM AEST
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Excellent and amazing write, you guys....
Well done...
Jenni


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 06:56:03 AM AEST
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Well done by all!
Luv the title and the poem fits it perfectly.
a masterpeice in any one's eyes.
Luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 05:57:17 AM AEST
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See what happens when ya all get together to write? Ta Daa!! A masterpiece. Very nice write, all. Kudos!
Thumps ; 0 )


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:31:43 AM AEST
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BRAVO, BRAVO, BRAVO............THIS WAS GREAT! DO IT AGAIN PLEASE!
Thank you Venkat for telling me it was here.
I wouldn't have wanted to miss this without care.
You were all superb!
Poetic hugs to you
consue


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:38:53 AM AEST
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wow..amazing collabaration..it is a master piece..great job. K


Re: Break me an iceberg (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 07:46:20 AM AEST
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Venkat, I never knew this was posted. I came back and found it gone a few weeks back.
If you want to reclassify the topic, you can ask Mick to include it in the Group Write topic. Just send him the URL and the title, and I'm sure he'd oblige you.

I really enjoyed taking part. Perhaps we could try some other kind of theme?

Well done to all others whom took part. 5 stars.




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