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Stop!
Contributed by
gentledove
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:44:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Life goes by at a quickened pace,
We run around from place to place.
Not bothering to stop and touch base,
With our loved ones, we just run the race.
Stop!
See the beauty that nature offers,
Glorious sunsets, mountain splendors.
Listen to the call of the Red Faced Warblers,
Smell the pine trees and the wild flowers.
Stop!
Tell your family how much you care,
Bow your head, close your eyes in prayer.
Settle grudges, relationships repair,
Don't let life catch you unaware.
Copyright ©
gentledove
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2004-07-22 22:44:31]
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Re: Stop!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:48:51 PM AEST
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wouldn't the world be a better place if we would just do the simple things.
thanks for the reminder. |
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Re: Stop!
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:52:55 PM AEST
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Words of wisdom written by a gentle soul....
Lovely write...
Jenni |
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Re: Stop!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:20:36 PM AEST
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Magnificent picture you shared. The words are as great in their meaning also. Great work here.
Rita |
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Re: Stop!
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by lilblkcat on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:11:56 AM AEST
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| Truely beautiful. It put a smile on my face. |
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Re: Stop!
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by venkat on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 04:26:59 AM AEST
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Magnificent picture..Meaningful thought.
very good.. venkat |
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Re: Stop!
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by pixie on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 08:38:51 AM AEST
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great write, so very true, life is bloody short, enjoy every moment greatly,
pixie xx |
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Re: Stop!
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by wray on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 11:58:49 AM AEST
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| I'm being such a harsh critic today.. Somehow the "Stop!" kinda threw me off each time I read it coz both are followed by such gentle words, although I'm sure that's the effect you intended. But otherwise I like it, and I plan to take your words to heart. |
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Re: Stop!
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 04:58:22 PM AEST
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beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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