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What I Want
Contributed by
Savannah
on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 05:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I want the world
The whole world and everything in it
All the pain
And the happiness
All the tears
And the laughs
All the people
And you
I want this moment
This moment and all that's crammed into it
All the emotions
And the refusals
All the thoughts
And the words
All the ones involved
And you
I want the dreams
The dreams I have and every part of them
All the fame
And the quiet nights
All the success
And the struggles
All the friends and family helping me
And you
I want the love
The true love and everything that goes with it
All the kisses
And the arguments
All the hugs
And the playful punches
All the other couples
And you
Copyright ©
Savannah
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2002-10-27 17:30:00]
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Re: What I Want
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by OreO on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 05:35:28 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful
expression of all the
loving things you want
hope you get all these things
in life, great write.
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: What I Want
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by Daniel on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 06:17:30 AM AEST
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| you know, i'm gonna save this one and remember that you wrote it... it's a lovely thought savannah and brings about throngs of not too old memories that i have quickly forgotten with the busyness of living. thanks fer reminding me, this is absolutely gorgeous. kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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