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When I Am Big
Contributed by
minnesotarose
on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 05:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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(To Donald)
When I am big
I will drive a big truck.
Brrum, Brrum, Brrum!
I will drive a big truck.
When I am big
I will ride a big train.
Choo, Choo, Choo!
I will ride a big train.
When I am big
I will row a big boat.
Swish, Swish, Swish!
I will row a big boat.
When I am big
I will catch a big bug.
Buzz, Buzz, Buzz!
I will catch a big bug.
When I am big
I will saw a big log.
Zoom, Zoom, Zoom!
I will saw a big log.
When I am big
I will laugh a big laugh.
Ha-ha, Ha, Ha!
I will laugh a big laugh.
When I am big
I will build a big house.
Bam, Bam, Bam!
I will build a big house.
Brrum! Choo! Swish!
Buzz! Zoom! Ha! Bam!
Then you will know
What a big boy I am.
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Re: When I Am Big
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 10:44:38 PM AEST
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| awwww this was so cute & sweet! I loved it! Christina God bless him! |
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Re: When I Am Big
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by horseluver on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 06:42:29 AM AEST
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| This poem almost made me cry. My best friends father is dying of brain cancer and I can see what a horrible sickness it really is. I wish Donald the best in life and hope that he will love and appreciate each and every moment of it. Keep going strong Donald!!!! XXOO ~ Jess |
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Re: When I Am Big
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by Daniel on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 06:15:08 AM AEST
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| i read it 3 times and i still don't know what to think. it's cute and adorable, and at the same time it pulls at heart strings thinking on what donald and numerous others have gone throu. this is a beautiful write. kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: When I Am Big
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by MinnesotaRose on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 12:08:46 PM AEST
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| Thank you for comments, this was my first attempt at writing poetry for children, I am pleased and a little humbled by the readers' responses. |
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Re: When I Am Big
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:29:40 PM AEST
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| When he is big he will be one of God's miracles. He will remember the love and generosity of his family and the medical staff. When he is big he will feel for those not as lucky as he and grow up to be a find strong young man. When he is big, he will stand tall, and breathe, and run, and love life. Thank you, Father, for each day he gets bigger. Blessings to Donald and you and all of your family. Rainbows forever. Rita |
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