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You are gone
Contributed by
pvd
on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:07:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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The experience ends,
memories linger.
Tide and time,
ebb and flow,
crashing waves
spray the haze
of remembrance,
revealing only
bits,
pieces,
fragments,
washed up driftwood
and
broken shells,
scattered
on weathered
rocks.
Copyright ©
pvd
... [
2004-07-22 21:07:42]
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Re: You are gone
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:50:32 PM AEST
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broken shells,
scattered
on weathered
rocks.
Splendid. |
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Re: You are gone
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by WinterFawn on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 06:32:39 AM AEST
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Tide and time,
ebb and flow,
.
Excellent verse.
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Re: You are gone
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:34:35 PM AEST
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an exqusitely beautiful masterpiece:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: You are gone
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by wray on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 10:28:05 AM AEST
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| Ooh nice bit of structural work. I like the random, subtle rhyme and fragmented lines. The lack of conclusion does leave a sense of lingering, very similar to lingering memories, which too have no conclusion, only futile and depressing existence. |
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Re: You are gone
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:06:38 AM AEST
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Interesting poem. I like this one alot. Good write.
Kimberly :) |
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