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Confessions Of A Heartbeat
Contributed by
blueheart
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:01:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Dreams giving rise to nostalgic thoughts,
Furnishing me with dipping emotions,
I reminisce on the million days ago,
When your eyes held my breath,
And I fell in love.
Pride interrupted the wishful thinking,
Feeling were locked within the empty soul,
I secured every inch of it,
For I feared my greatest fall,
And then you went away.
Unspoken words clung on to me,
They lingered around taunting me,
On what could have been,
What never existed,
And behind closed eyes I slept in regret.
Once in a while, I do pause,
To torcher my sanity with glimpses of you,
To magnify the distances,
Between my broken body and your presence,
And I cry bitter tears.
Why do these images invade me?
When I've cleansed myself of the past,
When I've finally moved on,
Or have I really?
And I realize, I'm still in love with you.
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blueheart
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2004-07-22 21:01:27]
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Re: Confessions Of A Heartbeat
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:17:38 PM AEST
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so sad, but even in the sorrow of your lost love, you write in such intense beauty, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Confessions Of A Heartbeat
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:46:17 PM AEST
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So beautifully written. Love cannot always be controlled as much as we would sometimes like too. The heart wants what it wants.
Rita |
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Re: Confessions Of A Heartbeat
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by venkat on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:46:37 AM AEST
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| So sad and hauntingly beautiful..painfully touches the heart my dear Hanna.. venkat |
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Re: Confessions Of A Heartbeat
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by pixie on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 08:44:37 AM AEST
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this is very sad and it touched me *hugs you*
I hope that one day you will feel ready to love again and move on , takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Confessions Of A Heartbeat
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 09:25:33 AM AEST
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| sad and well written. the pain comes through, I hope you find happiness. |
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Re: Confessions Of A Heartbeat
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by AspenGlow on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:24:45 PM AEST
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One sometimes wonders...are these loves that are lost only to be pieces of the better whole we are building to achieve...
Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Confessions Of A Heartbeat
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 12:08:09 PM AEST
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incredible poem. It is very vivid, sincere and deeply felt. Good job.
Em |
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Re: Confessions Of A Heartbeat
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by Soulless on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 11:26:17 AM AEST
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Very deep meaningful poem, one thats worth another glance. This is a very strong piece and a beautiful one.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Confessions Of A Heartbeat
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 05:13:30 AM AEST
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Sad but yet beautifull.
good work.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Confessions Of A Heartbeat
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:55:36 PM AEST
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Oh My how I love this poem Blueheart. How many times do tell our head, that it is all over, and we aren't going to even thing of it anymore!!!Then suddenly our heart begins to beat over and over......we are emerged in our sorrow......tears of death, and regret!
This poem was exceptional in every way!
Even blocking it from your mind......won't keep it away!
Excellent, and please let me say......how very sorry I am dear
Hugs.
consue |
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Re: Confessions Of A Heartbeat
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 06:54:40 PM AEST
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| Strange is it not.. that decisions of the past can come back to haunt us. Like many things associated with furious passion love has this nasty habit of creeping up on you. It is perhaps true that love can be put away but can never be put out, an undying flame if you will. A nice write telling of a tale that is quite common throughout. You might moved on but your heart is always your own..with all its wounds and tales of past turns. |
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Re: Confessions Of A Heartbeat
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:16:29 AM AEST
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Very sad but u tell it so well.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Confessions Of A Heartbeat
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:33:42 AM AEST
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| this was beautiful!!!! i can relate to the feelings expressed in the poem. excellent write. |
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