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Failed Love
Contributed by
parklanesouth
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 08:58:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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We dreamed of our own family
A home to call our own.
The kids, the dogs, and in-laws
A future not alone.
We planned of happiness together
A plan not too bold
The lights, the cable, the finacnes,
Spiraling out of control.
The love, the attention, the emotion,
Things left untold.
The lies, the mistrust, the deception,
Leave a burden on the soul.
The honeymoon should have never ended
Lost it all much too soon.
The blame can be shared acrross the board
I''m responsible them most of all.
I never lived up to the man she deserved
I left her no choice but to move on
''Cause all the pain and broken promises
Her heart she can give no more.
Her love for me suffered irreprable harm
Where did I go so wrong?
I can be that man you once dreamed of
I now know all my faults
I do not deserve another chance
But all ask is for this last one
The bills, the attention, and your dreams
I now know what must be done
This winding road does not have to end
I can still be your everlasting love
Copyright ©
parklanesouth
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2004-07-22 20:58:52]
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Re: Failed Love
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by punkprincess6689 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:04:54 PM AEST
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| that was really good. it was sad and everything. ur poem made me feel what u were feelingeven tho im only 15 if that makes any sense. keep writing |
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Re: Failed Love
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by Tarukar on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:14:35 PM AEST
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| Not bad for a first attempt. |
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Re: Failed Love
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:16:15 PM AEST
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A warm welcome to YPDC..the site where members care about one another.
It's funny how such a sad situation can bring out the best in us.... This is a good write..... I hope you can work things out with your wife........
Jenni |
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Re: Failed Love
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by JT on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:03:03 PM AEST
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this is a really good write, its a pitty about the circumstances. Its always easier to write feelings down than it is to speak them. Hope you work things out.
-jt- |
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Re: Failed Love
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:07:43 PM AEST
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Aw, this I found to be very sad with a touch of regret.
Welcome to the site and hope you continue to keep posting. |
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Re: Failed Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:50:17 PM AEST
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I am so sorry for your present circumstances and hope things can be worked out for you both. Sometimes scattering the dust reveals to us the right path. I hope all will correct itself.
Rita |
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Re: Failed Love
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by Parklanesouth on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 03:25:04 PM AEST
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| Thanks for all the input ladies and gents. Hopefully it will all work out in the ende, but sometimes injuries of the heart can never be healed. |
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