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Wash Your Hands
Contributed by
Tarukar
on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 08:33:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A crime of inaction
You sat by and watched
Covered your eyes with your hands
As passion broke free, and betrayed reason
Finally you raised a hand
Once it was all said and done
But that was just a ploy
You knew it was too late
Now the blood flows
And though you did nothing in truth
You can’t escape unscathed
The stream of blood, takes you in too
Wash your hands
Wash off your sin
Wash off that blood, wash off your guilt
Wash your hands, they’ll never come clean
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Tarukar
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2004-07-22 20:33:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Wash Your Hands
(User Rating: 1 ) by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 09:10:04 PM AEST (User
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YAY!!! Will has joined YPDC!!!! YAY!!!! YAY!!!! YAY!!!! **claps hands and hops on one foot til that foot is tired and then tries the other one**
But hey... I've read this one before and I like it. It's very... edgy, but it has a good rhythmic flow to it that I also enjoy.
WELCOME TO YPDC, WILLY!!!!!!
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea
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Re: Wash Your Hands
(User Rating: 1 ) by clowns_can_burn on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 11:00:30 AM AEST (User
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Thats a great write. It has a meaning to some people, it makes me think, and i love it |
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Re: Wash Your Hands
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 10:10:25 AM AEST (User
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This is a very good poem. You ahev a good heart to complement a clear writing style |
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