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The Girl in the Mirror
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 07:26:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I look into the mirror
I don’t know who I see
Some girl I’ve never seen before
I don’t know who she could be
I asked her nicely to go away
But she just said it back to me
I asked her not to do that
I don’t know what she wants from me
She told me I was worthless
And that I had no right to live
Then she told me I was a fool
And that I had nothing left to give
I asked why she said these things
She said because it was true
I stood there and I began to cry
But then she did too
I asked her why she was crying
She told me she was blue
So once again i asked her why
And she said “because I’m you”
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Re: The Girl in the Mirror
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 07:49:36 PM AEST
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look a little deeper at that girl in the mirror...you will find past the sadness...a beautiful shining spirit...but the choice is up to you which reflection you want to be
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Re: The Girl in the Mirror
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 07:54:09 PM AEST
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| I use too feel the same way, except I am a dude. this is well expressed. |
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Re: The Girl in the Mirror
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by DeLeriousTearZ on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 08:20:01 PM AEST
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Great write. I totally can relate to this poem...as I'm sure others do as well.
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Re: The Girl in the Mirror
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by brew on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 08:31:04 PM AEST
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| its the self concious..............I know, I am always told Im beautiful, but I DO NOT believe it one bit. But you know.beauty is not outer, but inner....so YES............you are beautiful! nice writing! Just know you are GREAT! |
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Re: The Girl in the Mirror
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by Tarukar on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 08:41:59 PM AEST
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| Most depressed poems, that I or others write, I can't stand to read. They seem to wallow in self pity. Yours seems much more insightful however, and though I could see the end coming, I still liked it. It's nice work. |
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Re: The Girl in the Mirror
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by Heartfilledblood on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 01:15:53 AM AEST
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This is really sad. I hope that you will see yourself a better person one day. From what ive read. If I saw you I would be happy to meet such a talented writer. Great poem.
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Re: The Girl in the Mirror
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by pixie on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 08:48:40 AM AEST
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can relate on a personal level to your poem, it spoke volumes to me *hugs* very sad and emotional write,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: The Girl in the Mirror
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 09:29:34 AM AEST
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| Nicely done! Remember the girl in the mirror has a wonderful talent. |
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Re: The Girl in the Mirror
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:30:42 AM AEST
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Wow.. stunning
wish id written that
BS x |
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Re: The Girl in the Mirror
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by PieceOfABrokenSoul on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:38:59 PM AEST
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| Though i can't completly relate to you i do to a very small level. But all better this was a good write, keep it up. |
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Re: The Girl in the Mirror
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by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 11:18:42 PM AEST
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great write.
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Re: The Girl in the Mirror
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 10:57:10 PM AEST
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I saw you had coments on some of my poems and i remember reading a few of yours and i liked them. So i looked up your name and decided to read more of your poems. They are really good. I really like this one. Keep up the good writes!
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Re: The Girl in the Mirror
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by buccaneer on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:55:02 PM AEST
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lovely and funny i wonder why we can't understand what we feel about howself even when we are confronted with the same picture of howself.
lovely. |
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