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UNCHARTED ROAD
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:47:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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"UNCHARTED ROAD"
Life can be likened to an Uncharted Road.....
Ghosts on a stage, our voices are echoed.
No directions, unexplored, no map to check.
Victim or Victor? We only get one trek!
Falseness, invalidity, illegality, emptiness.....
Numerous hypocrites, without character, aimless.
We become like our associates, choose those wholesome.
Victims choose negativity, Victors choose positivism.
Appearing like a speck of dust, disappearing ghosts.....
Following our Uncharted Road, without guideposts.
Majority marching along miserably side by side.
Takes only one to stand out, strong against the tide.
"Truth" is his name, ages old from the very beginning.
Unwanted, not needed, he considers it a blessing.
Guided by his conscience, led by his integrity.,
Deemed the Victor, not the victim, set ghost free!
Life 's Uncharted Road taught him many lessons wisely.....
He never allowed his past circumstances to control or determine his destiny!
Not wallowing in self-defeat, self-sabotage, self-pity, or depression.
He realised he had the capacity to get past his past,
and experience Victory, 'twas never beaten!
Created by
Lovingcritters
July 23, 2004
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"Self-Pity is easily the most destructive of the
nonpharmacetical narcotics; it is addictive, gives
momentary pleasure and separates the victim
from all reality!" ~John W. Gardner~
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"What does not destroy you......
Makes you stronger!"
~Friedrich Nietzsche~!
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Re: UNCHARTED ROAD
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 04:10:57 PM AEST
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awesome write Conni Sue
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Re: UNCHARTED ROAD
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 04:19:53 PM AEST
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I much prefer to be the victor in events in my life. It gets so very tiring watching all the victims moan about their life situation. Why don't they just take charge and change it instead of pitying themselves and living in it? Not a christian attitude, but it gets really depressing having to watch them fail over and over and over due to their life choices. I will probably make half the site angry but that is just my take on life.
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Re: UNCHARTED ROAD
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by pixie on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 05:27:04 PM AEST
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a truly amazing write.. your work makes me really think about stuff *hugs you*
takecare,
and keep writing these amazing poems,
pixie xx |
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Re: UNCHARTED ROAD
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 06:07:24 PM AEST
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great write ...i chose victor...and the truth
Shari |
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Re: UNCHARTED ROAD
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:13:56 PM AEST
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Oh, I would definitely choose being the victor over the victim.
An insightful read, very intresting and with a great message. |
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Re: UNCHARTED ROAD
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:47:04 PM AEST
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| I would choose to be the victor but always seem to be the VICTIM!Funny how that is! Christina |
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Re: UNCHARTED ROAD
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:53:34 PM AEST
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| great message - thanks for sharing this. |
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Re: UNCHARTED ROAD
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by AspenGlow on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 08:50:20 AM AEST
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We have the choice, to a degree, is the glass half empty or half full......do we have a glass.
Thought provoking, and another great write, thank you for sharing. |
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Re: UNCHARTED ROAD
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 03:15:09 AM AEST
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Very wise words, mom.
Great work of art.
huggs, miles, luv,
your brat,
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