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Wont Miss Me
Contributed by
xemptydecemberx
on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:15:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Alone in the rain placed on these stairs
Over the edge, assesing these fading cares
In one hand some pictures the other some steel
Shall I push it deep enough to where I can't feel?
I plee with myself, but this aint worth it
Resting on my skin, I feel I deserve it
Nah, I love life, just not the pain
I go self-inflicted, do it all in vein
Im just broken hearted and real tired
Its either this or set this whole city on fire
But im not out to hurt others
So I push the blade at an angle
To reassure all of my veins become mangled
All my life lives have gotten tangled
Nah, I cant, Im really scared
But these thoughts aint new, Ive been prepared
Feeling distant, avoiding issues
Dae Sha Vu, I need crimson on this tissue
To blanket my arm, to take this away
The skin where the demon shall enter and stay
I feel i cant convince you but I gotta blame somebody
I got the knife, I couldnt find the shotty.
You did good, a good friend
But this is it, it needs to end
This aint the life I wanted to live
So a single stroke of this ***** is what I get
Lost in this a downward spiral
Last minute debation, cause when I yank it, its final.
Sweats pouring, adrenalines racing
Seconds ticking, hands are shaking.
Memories torture, Ive tried, I cant push anymore
Last change to decide before they put the chalk on the floor
Outline my life, no one will miss me
If Im lucky, you might exploit my tradgety.
Copyright ©
xemptydecemberx
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2004-07-22 15:15:53]
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Re: Wont Miss Me
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by pixie on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:18:12 PM AEST
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awwww this is very sad and emotional :( *hugs you*
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Wont Miss Me
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by screwup on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 04:58:40 PM AEST
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| wow...no one can pour this much emotion into this as you can so keep writing and never give up. We all have our time with suicide... |
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Re: Wont Miss Me
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by lilblkcat on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 12:51:13 AM AEST
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| This was such an intense poem. I loved it. Thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: Wont Miss Me
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by teagy03 on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 12:00:55 AM AEST
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This is such an intense poem...I felt so much like it was me...Thankyou for sharing...
Teagy |
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